Here's a poem that I found written in my purse. A while back, I had explained that I would post these from time to time. I did tweet the first few lines as Micropoetry on Twitter recently and I thought it would be nice to include the conclusion. What do you think?
As darkening waters existed over my world
I hoped to find the miracle that could bring me in from drowning
To treasure me, keep me safe
Even if only by listening to me
It unloads my hurt
opens my soul
makes me vulnerable
makes me love
I like the way that feels
Don’t leave my life
Don’t stop calling
No matter what you think
I may say
I’m here for you
The truth remains
through your presence
you brought me joy
and saved me from drowning.
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Poetry from My Purse - Finding the Miracle
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Julie
Sunday, February 27, 2011
Labels: my writing , poetry
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2 comments:
Hi Julie, I have to say, I like this particular poem quite a lot. You continue to improve as a writer. Keep at it. :-)
Thanks so much, Writermind. I appreciate every bit of encouragement to write that I receive!
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